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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 21, 2005 13:14:21 GMT -5
Your poems are alright Hunt Cheese...but the problem is...they don't rhyme. Poems that don't rhyme suck... ;D
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Post by hunter on Sept 21, 2005 13:29:20 GMT -5
lol i was waiting for a smartass remark from you...figured I would see them sooner. But, I don't try and rhyme. I write what comes from my heart, nigga. ![:)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/smiley.png)
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 21, 2005 14:24:59 GMT -5
POEMS ARE SUPPOSE TO RHYME...OR ATLEAST SAY, "Quote the Raven, nevermore!" ![:P](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/tongue.png)
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Post by loki on Sept 22, 2005 0:35:12 GMT -5
shut up luis, you wouldnt know good poetry if it hit you in the nuts.
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 22, 2005 5:44:20 GMT -5
LoKi...kissing Hunter's ass? Who would have seen that one coming?
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Post by hunter on Sept 22, 2005 10:03:31 GMT -5
Yes, I deleted them. If anyone wants to see them all they have to do is IM me......
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 22, 2005 13:55:45 GMT -5
Why did you delete them Hunt Cheese? I was only intentionally trying to hurt your feelings with my joke, ![:P](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/tongue.png)
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Post by hunter on Sept 22, 2005 13:57:57 GMT -5
lol it wasn't you, but here is the latest..
"Fuck You" by Matt
Fuck you bitch.
Yeah, that's right. You hurt her. You made her question herself.
Fuck you.
Imma kill you. I'm going to make you pay. You don't do that shit. Not in my hood.
Look around you kid. The whole world hates you, but guess what??
Don't worry about the whole fuckin' world.
Worry about me. Worry about your life. Worry about your soul.
I'll fuck you up mayne
Yeah, that's right.
I'm takin' your ass to school.
FUCK YOU!!
To the whole world. To you.
Fuck. You.
I run this shit, your just another playa in my way. I'm about to expose you muh'fucka.
You messin' with almighty messiah.
So I a white boy?? You got a fuckin' problem with that??
I'll still take your ass back to tha hood. This cracka is about to shoot you dead.
BOOM! Bitch..
You're dead..
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Post by Slither on Sept 22, 2005 14:24:40 GMT -5
I had the chance to read them before you deleted them good stuff Puff Cake
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 22, 2005 15:26:16 GMT -5
THE NEW ONE DOESN'T RHYME
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Post by loki on Sept 22, 2005 17:14:09 GMT -5
not kissing his ass. If they sucked then it would be considered ass kissing. His poetry is really good.
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 22, 2005 17:27:47 GMT -5
It's ok...for it not rhyming and all.
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Post by enderslyth on Sept 22, 2005 23:59:23 GMT -5
If anyone is up for reading... I write alot... Actually, right now, I have over 240 on my Deviant Art account... Check it out if you like. www.lifeismediocre.deviantart.comEnjoy.
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 23, 2005 0:13:50 GMT -5
Do you rhyme in your writing Ender? If not...BOOO! ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/wink.png)
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Post by loki on Sept 23, 2005 4:09:20 GMT -5
*points at luis* BOO THAT MAN
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 23, 2005 4:10:28 GMT -5
Yes...BOOOO
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Post by hunter on Sept 24, 2005 3:21:09 GMT -5
Alright, well I'm not going to be posting them anymore, although i am going to be having a site with all my work on it, and I am inviting anyone who wishes to join. come. don't come. It's all really your decision. But, nonetheless here it is.. groups.msn.com/Rantsofthesoul
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 24, 2005 3:22:36 GMT -5
Finishing where Hunter left off {before he modified it}...
"...and they're all going to be real poems and rhyme."
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Post by hunter on Sept 24, 2005 3:23:05 GMT -5
...bitch, stfu!
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Sept 24, 2005 3:24:14 GMT -5
...Bitch? Where's the bitches?
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