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Post by Grimm on Dec 10, 2015 16:54:04 GMT -5
I predict I post some feedback tomorrow morning.
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Post by Grimm on Dec 11, 2015 10:05:29 GMT -5
Bloody Murder
Ah, the dream RP…the means by which to write whatever you please and involving whomever you wish. Though crazy as an Alexa Black dream would have to be, I think N. Saniti had a good point when he said, “You don’t have what it takes to defeat us as long as you allow your Wrath to rule your heart.” Blind rage can only get you so far. But it looks as if Alexa isn’t interested in what he has to say. That is one angry young woman, and I foresee the next few shows either pushing her further over the edge, or causing her to rethink what this dream tried to show her. Maybe Alexa will consider taking it down a notch or two if things don’t work out to her satisfaction?
Nightmares and New Beginnings
Hey, another dream! And again with N.Saniti and these mysterious amulets. Could it be that Hiroshi and Alexa are somehow linked now? Or is it just a bizarre coincidence? Like I mentioned with Alexa’s RP, I believe the early part of the new year will show us what Hiroshi can truly do in PCW. I like him as a character, and I think you’ve only scratched the surface with his potential. No matter how he fares at the PPV I’d like to see more of the man behind the sumo.
One Step Closer to the Palm of My Hand
I’ll repeat what I told you off the boards in regards to this RP: “Darn you straight to heck, Josh.” Regardless of who wins this, I’d like to think we both did everything we could with our pieces and whoever ends up champion will have earned it.
As is par for the Sadistic course, you’ve woven multiple bits together into a single RP. That would collapse into an illegible mess in less capable hands, but as your recent record shows that is not the case here. And you’ve worked in the word play, the overarching story, the bizarro Hangtown bits (aren’t you glad I came up with Hangtown those many years ago? I never could have predicted what that would have turned into!), the glimpse into Billy’s character away the arena…in other words, a tight RP worthy of a world champion.
This has been a good build to what will undoubtedly be a doozy of a match, and it’s been a pleasure working with you. Again.
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