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Post by Nathan Saniti on Mar 4, 2016 12:25:58 GMT -5
While the kudos in the shoutbox are very much appreciated, more precise feedback really helps those of us in the creative team know what to keep doing and what not to do. Please help us out by leaving feedback here as well.
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Post by Raven Hex on Mar 4, 2016 23:53:59 GMT -5
As my first read of results in this fed, I have to say, I love the commentary style and it seems like the written matches are all genuine and the time has been taken by the writer to actually do their best to adapt to the wrestling styles and personalities of the wrestler, rather than the copy and paste, wrestler 1 armbars wrestler 2.
I still have to read parts of it, but overall the show made sense, except for the part where Hex and Fierce were lead to the ring for their match when they were already in the ring, but that is neither here, nor there.
It was an enjoyable and fluid read, and maybe next time when I'm more familiar, I can offer some constructive criticism.
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Post by Eira on Mar 5, 2016 12:14:49 GMT -5
I still have to read parts of it, but overall the show made sense, except for the part where Hex and Fierce were lead to the ring for their match when they were already in the ring, but that is neither here, nor there. There was a seg-leading-into-match that had to be modified and I may have missed some of the wording that should have been changed - I'll try to be more thorough with edits next time! Thank you for the feedback, it really is helpful. ^_^ Glad you enjoyed the results! |
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Post by Andy D on Mar 5, 2016 12:48:59 GMT -5
There was a seg-leading-into-match that had to be modified and I may have missed some of the wording that should have been changed I bear the unfortunate news that my biggest criticism of the results is to do with the fact you did miss stuff that made this whole seg/match bit weird. That criticism will probably not be as harsh now I know that its actually down to incomplete editing, but I'm still going to say it live on the Pulse tonight (ok, so I shamelessly got a cheep plug for the show in, but as host I feel it is my job to do that at every opportunity). Overall, show was awesome though... and I'll also be saying how awesome it was live on the pulse tonight (see, told you. Every opportunity) |
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Post by Eira on Mar 5, 2016 16:08:21 GMT -5
Fixed.
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Post by Andy D on Mar 5, 2016 16:14:34 GMT -5
Damn it, now I have to go back through my notes and see if my criticism still exists in some form... and I've been procrastinating so naturally my notes aren't finished yet! |
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Post by Eira on Mar 5, 2016 16:31:10 GMT -5
Damn it, now I have to go back through my notes and see if my criticism still exists in some form... and I've been procrastinating so naturally my notes aren't finished yet! In several pages and thousands of words worth of material, I'm pretty sure there's still a mistake or two in there somewhere. xD |
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Post by Grimm on Mar 7, 2016 10:43:01 GMT -5
Have Ace and Jerry always been so snarky to each other? I know in the past it depended on who wrote the match, but they seemed more consistent this event….which I suppose is what you want, after all.
It helps to have a history with someone who’s already in a fed when you first join one. Raven Hex and Dan Fierce have a good thing going already, and it’s really helping in getting the character over.
Regarding the Sebastian Stone segment…I don’t think I’ve ever been more proud of Grimm in all his years in the business.
Disco Stud was wise to leave Jury and Alexa Black to themselves. He doesn’t quite have the temperament to trade blows with those two, but it was a good solid match none the less...until yet another character shows up to interfere on Black’s behalf. What is that, something like 5 or 6 now?
You can probably say this about any booking involving Q, but he and Crazy Boy are an interesting match-up. And much like the past champion, Hiroshi, PCW now has an Underground champion who isn’t nearly as hardcore as some of the other members of the roster. He’s got his work cut out for him.
The Showtime / NCM match included plenty of good ring psychology. And a big win for Wryght, too.
As with any match involving no-shows, the result of the Main Event was a foregone conclusion. But as is typical for PCW, the writer did a good job of portraying the results without making anyone look particularly weak. In fact, it all came off with some legit character development. Well done.
And now it’s PPV time!
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