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Brenna Gordon
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sail with me into the [DARK]

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Feedback, please? Mar 28, 2016 16:21:08 GMT -5 Eira likes this

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Post by Brenna Gordon on Mar 28, 2016 16:21:08 GMT -5

I'm not looking just for feedback on my first official RP, though that would be nice. Rather, I'm looking for overall feedback with her preludes included. I'll return the favor when it comes to giving feedback if you'd like me to. Links are below for convenience's sake.

prelude one

prelude two

prelude three

chapter one | haunted

Grimm PCW Hall of Famer Lord of Misrule Posts: 4,518	Feedback, please? Mar 29, 2016 13:35:58 GMT -5 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Grimm on Mar 29, 2016 13:35:58 GMT -5 For continuity's sake, I'm posting this feedback in the Trauma 189 RP Feedback thread.
	I have seen landscapes,which, under a particular light, made me feel that at any moment a giant might raise his head over the next ridge. Nature has that in her which compels us to invent giants: and only giants will do. --C.S. Lewis

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