Cory Steel
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Post by Cory Steel on Apr 12, 2016 8:36:50 GMT -5
Well I had a bunch of stuff fucking typed...Gordon and Creed awesome awesome work I'm definitely impressed. This boner blood rush of new talent is sweetness, fresh eyes, ideas, new story's, and more matches! (yeah mules!)
RP of the week goes to my main guy Simon! Alex's Black has come a long way and I find myself itching to read your work each cycle! So expect some votes from me come next Iceys.
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Post by Grimm on Apr 12, 2016 8:56:56 GMT -5
Triple-Dipped FML: If I may quote a passage...
"That was short and to the point."
Kelli grins over her shoulder at him. "I've found, Harris, that if you use the right words you don't need near as many of them."
That's what I've been trying to tell you people for years!
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Cory Steel
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The Taint of PCW
Death waits for no man
Posts: 1,110
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Post by Cory Steel on Apr 12, 2016 18:17:45 GMT -5
I could use some feedback pweeease
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Post by Dontevius Ellis on Apr 12, 2016 20:50:44 GMT -5
I could use some feedback pweeease I know the feels. Wanted some veteran feedback on my CD piece. Got some great feedback from Saniti through PM and my buddy who's also new to PCW but wanted some variety. I could give some feedback but I'm not sure I'd be a good source. It's like I'm covered with grass, I'm so green.  |
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Post by Grimm on Apr 12, 2016 21:25:27 GMT -5
I could use some feedback pweeease I know the feels. Wanted some veteran feedback on my CD piece. Got some great feedback from Saniti through PM and my buddy who's also new to PCW but wanted some variety. I could give some feedback but I'm not sure I'd be a good source. It's like I'm covered with grass, I'm so green. FINE. Please see your other Feedback request post. |
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Post by Dontevius Ellis on Apr 12, 2016 22:08:35 GMT -5
I know the feels. Wanted some veteran feedback on my CD piece. Got some great feedback from Saniti through PM and my buddy who's also new to PCW but wanted some variety. I could give some feedback but I'm not sure I'd be a good source. It's like I'm covered with grass, I'm so green. FINE. Please see your other Feedback request post. You're a sweetheart. I don't care what Kris says about ya.  |
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Post by Grimm on Apr 12, 2016 22:19:46 GMT -5
I could use some feedback pweeease I don't want it to seem like I'm singling Jury out, but his request reminded me of something I've thought about before (and it may be best addressed in a topic all its own...), so here we go. I completely understand feedback for new members, as it can be difficult to transition from fed to fed and pick up on each federation's idiosyncrasies. That can be really helpful. But when a veteran is concerned, does feedback help? We all like to hear our writing is entertaining or whatnot (don't lie, you know you do), but unless you're really changing your style or voice, is there anything we can say that would make a difference? I'm not being facetious, I think this is interesting. EDIT: Though I suppose there's always the chance someone may see something in our writing that we overlook due to over-familiarity with ourselves, and that may take us in an entirely different direction or lead us to address something we'd never considered before. So who knows. |
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Post by Alexa Black on Apr 13, 2016 6:29:36 GMT -5
Well I had a bunch of stuff fucking typed...Gordon and Creed awesome awesome work I'm definitely impressed. This boner blood rush of new talent is sweetness, fresh eyes, ideas, new story's, and more matches! (yeah mules!) RP of the week goes to my main guy Simon! Alex's Black has come a long way and I find myself itching to read your work each cycle! So expect some votes from me come next Iceys. Thank you Cory Steel. That means a lot. I have been trying hard to get better. And I'm glad you like what I write. I think you will like what I have in store for next werk so stay tuned |
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Post by Justin Kaard on Apr 13, 2016 17:18:43 GMT -5
I could use some feedback pweeease I don't want it to seem like I'm singling Jury out, but his request reminded me of something I've thought about before (and it may be best addressed in a topic all its own...), so here we go. I completely understand feedback for new members, as it can be difficult to transition from fed to fed and pick up on each federation's idiosyncrasies. That can be really helpful. But when a veteran is concerned, does feedback help? We all like to hear our writing is entertaining or whatnot (don't lie, you know you do), but unless you're really changing your style or voice, is there anything we can say that would make a difference? I'm not being facetious, I think this is interesting. EDIT: Though I suppose there's always the chance someone may see something in our writing that we overlook due to over-familiarity with ourselves, and that may take us in an entirely different direction or lead us to address something we'd never considered before. So who knows. To respond to this, yes I do enjoy hearing that people enjoyed my rp's. However hearing what they did and did not enjoy shows me which bits are working and which are not. It gives me insight into how my story should progress. It's not necessarily a matter of changing voice or style, sometimes it's just that we (read I) need to know what about my pieces that people like and what they don't. Just my two cents. |
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