And like the title of Dokken’s fourth album I’m Back for the Attack! I have five left to cover, but before I get to that…
Whitey: Hahaha, I thought so. It came across as feeling like it actually happened. Your fact about writing while writing beyond drunk is interesting. It never ever felt that way, so that’s pretty awesome man. I also thank you for the compliment on my feedback.
Yukio: My memory didn’t let me down then, lol.
And now for the remainder.
Star of Babylon – Lust: Chapter 03First up, the wonderful world(s) of Nathan Saniti. Right out of the gate you got me fist pumping with an Eagles reference. I thought it was a clever use of their best known album title. Equal applause for Ms. Starr on name dropping Don Henley, who had (has? I have to see if he still tours) a good solo career also.
As a lover of the Arts, this spoke right to my heart:
“You see, this place...is a conglomeration of all that has been artistically created. Stories, song, poetry, and other forms of art become their own words. Mr. Henley’s songs are no exception. It’s an archive of sorts.”
One of my absolute favorite things about your work, is the output of bizarre creativity. The worlds, the assorted characters, sometimes even the speeches. I feel like I should make a legend just to keep track of it all, hahaha. We talk often enough that I have somewhat of an idea of things to come. Even if its just a random fleeting idea (as I’m prone to throw out on occasion), it still adds to the excitement of how your stories progress and build from one place to another. Here we have the returning Baron Samedi, who was last seen on a trip to New Orleans (see? I remember).
The reply from an undead minion was humorous, in particular his jaw loosening. I should take back minion, as I know who Joey Handy is. So this should be fun to see play out as you progress.
“A zombie not needing to eat is good.” hahaha.
Resurgence:: 1Following Nathan, we have his opponent this week (pre-empted last show) in the returning badass AND new mother herself, Eira. I’m happy Kris was able to post an RP with her. I know there was some concern about having to put her back on the shelf, but such isn’t the case this week. I’ll start with the fact she now has a child, as I’m curious to see how that aspect plays with not only her, but The Order and Murdoc.
As with Whitey, we have another facing the wrath of Mother Nature, who just won’t let up with the snow. Tomato soup with grilled cheese = classic. I really enjoy the parenting on display throughout. I don’t know how much real life experience has found its way in, but that’s besides the point. It rocks to see (it also is making me think of what characters also have children).
“The grilled cheese. That’s Nathan’s thing, isn’t it?”
“I guess it is, isn’t it? I mean, the catering table didn’t really start stocking them til he showed up.”
And here’s where the concern I mentioned shows in the RP (nicely done btw).
“Compete. You’ve seen me the last two shows. I just seem to be getting worse rather than better.”
Murdoc leans back in his chair, regarding her with an amused sort of calm. “You know you’ve said this before, right? You told me you didn’t think you could do it. You told me you’d never get there.” he shrugs. “You told me all this, and you won the World Championship before I did.”
“And? I’ve been gone a year, and I haven’t felt ready either time back in the ring.”
Vulnerable and honest. I’m looking forward to seeing how the match with Nathan plays out, as I like the contrast. WILL Eira continue to have rust? She had an excellent outing with Whitey that could be revisited down the road, so it’ll be interesting to see what happens on Trauma.
“So what do I do from here? How am I supposed to beat him when I can’t even tell which version of him it’s going to be?” (good insight, fair question) “Or his – friends? Harvesters? I can’t even pretend to know what the hell THAT’S all about.”
Hahaha, a Seromine reference being snuck in. I am so dead LOL jk jk. I’ll return to that in a moment, because it isn’t the last one.
I was hoping to see some interaction with The Order, and I wasn’t let down one bit with what is here. Even the brief showing of Murdoc’s ire lends something extra. For some reason, I kept playing the conclusion in a Matrix style in my head. Lol, no idea why. It’s a compliment though, that much I can say.
Lmao, “first things first, you’re going to kick Nathan’s ass.”
And after Eira’s response, Seromine is brought up a second time, further cementing that I am so dead down the road. Lol
“No, I just want to see you win because I think you can. No, your job assignment is Seromine.”
She glances down at the paper Van slides her way, her quick eye catching a few words that latch in her interest.
“Seromine, hm? I was already working with -”
“Mr. Ford, yes. You’ll forgive me if I’d rather you have more intel. Intelligence is power.”
I wonder how many cases of beer will be required...lol. Awesome work, Kris. I really enjoyed the read.
Warwyks Honor?And here we have the latest from the handler of Judge and Cory Steel, or as I like to think of them, Underground legends. Remember how f’n brutal he was in those matches??
I love the choice of Conor McGregor for a base pic, btw.
“Standing at the bar drinking down his pint of beer was a young man with bright flaming red hair was the star of Saturday night fights, Warwyk. He had a name of course but for as long as anyone could remember they just called him Warwyk after his explosive temper and thirst to fight, every fight was a war to him.”
That is a nice explanation of how the name came to be. Oh! Speaking of the name, I really dig the font switch on the W’s and Y in your display name. Given the fact that Warwyk is a fighter, that should make for an interesting dynamic with Hiroshi. The size difference alone has me curious to see what becomes of the debut.
Coke fueled arsehole, lol. Classic.
This was a good way to start and give the reader a basic introduction to the character, without getting too in depth yet. It’s now established he’s a man who has a yearning to fight, but not just fight, go to war! Which if his in-ring plays off that description, could mean violence. This guy could definitely be fun to see in the Underground. The creation of the character name has been stated (I like little details like that). And then to cap things off, he signs his PCW contract while exhibiting some of those explosive anger traits. Thumbs up from this guy
Left Behind, Found AgainI don’t know if anyone will agree with me or not, but I think High Tide is underrated. Idr when, but the handler had mentioned adjusting to writing in first person. I haven’t used that style in ages, but I remember having fun with it. So if you’re reading this Tide, I think you are doing good with it.
Plus, c’mon. A wrestling pirate. There are only two other examples I can think of who carried that. Jean-Pierre LaFitte (remember when he stole Bret Hart’s jacket?) and Paul Burchill (who would then go on to have an underdeveloped incest angle with Katie Lea aka Winter). But I digress.
In this, we have Tide doing some soul searching and questioning why he should be at the bottom, when he could work his way back up the ladder. A fair thought to ponder on. It seems if he has had enough of his position and intends to do something about it to return back to success (will Wasp be returning with him?)
One of my favorite parts of your RP is this:
“I picked up my pace, as I was in a very sketchy part of town. There was enough trouble here that even I was cautious, borderline afraid and that was a rare occurrence. My eyes checked every corner, scanned every nook and cranny. I had left this life once, and if I went back down this road, there was no turning back. Was it even worth it? Well I knew what my answer was and even if others didn’t agree, well they weren’t living the life I was. I smile even though the area is grim. Yes, life did have a funny way of working things out.”
Yeah, Tide vs Crazy Boy grabbed my interest immediately. Talk about even matched.
I REALLY liked the conversation towards the end. I’d highlight it, but then I would have to point out everything lol so to anyone who reads the RP, check out the final act. Rock solid conclusion to end your effort this cycle as well. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing what happens next and how you do with first person, the more you get used to using it.
Candy KissesLast, but not least, A big time favorite character of mine: Kelli Starr. We briefly talked Monday Night, to which I provided some feedback there and laughed at how Seromine got described. I don’t remember exactly what I wrote to you, so if I leave something out, forgive me!
The first thing that I noticed was the non-existence of the bright pink font color. I’m a fan of the blog style in general, so you put it to good use here. The outright fear she has about seeing Seromine again, and to a lesser extent, the state of mind Rick Majors is in, was really captured. Not even straying off subject to talk about something more pleasant (Naughty and Nice, lol) helped.
“We have Seromine who has already tried to kill me, but now he’s all crazy and YAY GOD about it so he’ll be boring the fuck out of me while he attempts homicide.” hahahaha, that’s one way of putting it. Kelli trying to figure out who Destiny was also got me laughing. The thing I have always said about Dollface, is just how absolutely lovable she is. She’s written in such a way that you don’t want to see harm happen. Her heart is in the right place, her emotional state fluctuates based on the situation, but when we get right down to it all, she wants to be loved and accepted.
And this is what makes her the perfect contrast against some of PCW’s baddies (Alexa is a prime example). On an unrelated note, love the name drop of Stand By Your Man (Tammy Wynette for anyone who doesn’t know the song. 70’s country), always been a fan of the song.
“I know this hasn’t made much sense, but I don’t know how to process this, not when Rick Majors scares me almost as much as Seromine does.”
-but I don’t know how to process this-
The bow on the present right there. Everything prior is well stated and written to the best that she can understand it (returning to the way her brain works), and then that one little line hammers all of that fear home. She knows the husband and wife on the other side of the ring aren’t coming to play nice, especially him, given what happened in the past (although there was that nice letter of recruitment
). But she also has that same level of concern with her own teammate. It’s nicely put imo.
Excellent stuff, my dear friend.
And that’s all, folks.
(Yep, a Looney Tunes tie-in!)