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Post by Nathan Saniti on Apr 28, 2017 20:41:38 GMT -5
SInce the RP feedback thread was so popular, I thought I'd waste more board space with a feedback thread for the Trauma 210 show. Can't blame a guy for trying. Anyhoo... SPOILERS AHEAD! Also, if you desire your RP scores, then you MUST leave BOTH RP AND SHOW feedback!
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Post by "The Asshole" Whitey Ford on Apr 29, 2017 12:40:58 GMT -5
WHERE'S THE DAMN CARD, DAN!?!? WHERE'S THE DAMN CARD!??!
Good job not squashing SAM, but I need to be honest here. If SAM does come back next week, how far can his character go? It appeared by the one RP he wrote that he's just a Donald Trump parody, and he seemed to use all the Trump cliche's in one piece.
The banter between Kyle Shane and Hiroshi was nice. Was that co-written by both handlers? I really enjoyed the off-the-cuff feel to the dialogue. The quick exchange was nice too, not letting Shane take too much damage and showing he's able to hang with the powerhouse.
Another big win for High Tide. Definitely one of the PCW mainstays, the match seemed a little short but I liked how both looked strong, kicking out of each others trademark moves.
(I'll feedback the rest of the show later, I'm being rushed out to do errands.)
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Post by "The Asshole" Whitey Ford on Apr 30, 2017 19:45:44 GMT -5
More feedback to come! My girlfriend's mother got diagnosed within the last month with stage 4 small cell cancer of the liver, brain, other goddamn organs, but mostly the lungs which is where it originated (she's a very heavy smoker.) So I haven't been around to really put in the other half of the feedback. I'll give a few more smaller points though.
-Dan, I'm not sure if I deserved that win, but the match itself was well done. I'm feeling like I've been on the cusp of an amazing storyline for a while now and it's about to fucking explode. Shit's about to get real, and I think there will be some very strange alliances happening very shortly.
-Do you guys know how fucking hard I nerded out when I thought Ace Anderson was back!?!? Fucking A, man! That was a bad joke, you guys are dicks. But it was very, very well played. Sorry NCM, I love you and all but me and Ace have some unfinished business!
Can you guys please do me a personal favor, who ISN'T Seromine (since he always is one of the people to give feedback,) and give some more feedback? I didn't write anything for this show but it's a lot of work to put something like this together. This is the second consecutive time that Dan has asked for feedback I believe, and the feedback wasn't really all there. If you want your character to get the limelight, don't be selfish; read the show and tell them what could be better and what you enjoyed. This is a community; I have never tuned in to a wrestling program to watch one match, and I don't wrestle. We should all at least read the results that are written for us and give feedback, whether it's positive or negative.
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Post by The Anarchist on Apr 30, 2017 19:59:26 GMT -5
Oh damn! Sorry about her mom, man. That's rough. I'll keep you guys in my thoughts.
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Post by Grimm on May 1, 2017 8:44:05 GMT -5
Given the timing of the results posting (and the fact that other than the occasional OOC or PM comment I'm PCW-free on the weekends), this morning was my first opportunity to give the results a good thorough reading. I had some feedback worked up and ready to share, but then I saw Whitey's post. And since I don't want to take the risk of looking like I care what Whitey thinks, I'm going to hold off on sharing this feedback until later this week, just out of spite.
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Post by "The Asshole" Whitey Ford on May 1, 2017 10:25:23 GMT -5
Given the timing of the results posting (and the fact that other than the occasional OOC or PM comment I'm PCW-free on the weekends), this morning was my first opportunity to give the results a good thorough reading. I had some feedback worked up and ready to share, but then I saw Whitey's post. And since I don't want to take the risk of looking like I care what Whitey thinks, I'm going to hold off on sharing this feedback until later this week, just out of spite. Smart. I'd do the same thing. |
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Post by Non Compos Mentis on May 1, 2017 12:24:58 GMT -5
Given that there were a few no-shows I feel like the show was handled about as well as it could have been.
I'm not sure what the situation is with SAM, but Alexandra Tamora continues to impress and she's being put over well in her first couple of matches as a real contender. Perhaps that's why SAM didn't receive the same treatment as one of the other TIIT no-showers later, but either way the match did its job in making Tamora look strong.
The Shane/Yukio seg continues to build on their rivalry and it's good to see the consistence of Yokio's honor and respect being used to hold others to account. At times the Underground has seemed a bit devoid of storylines due to how fast the title can change hands, but this rivalry is a good thing for both involved.
Tide vs CB was a nice competitive match and on a personal note it's good to see Justin have a good run with High Tide. Both of these guys deserve to go further but Tide edged what I'm sure was a very even contest in a well written match.
Hmmm, NCM's seg with Loki... I wonder what that means. Hmmmmmmm.
Not sure why you're saying sorry to me, Whitey, seems like it's Albino Gojira you need to take up issue with. Not sure if Goji showed or now as a mystery entrant but given the length of the match I'd guess not. The match is what it is, and Yukio vs Tamora should prove to be a great challenge for both on the next show. Definitely expecting some shenanigans with Kyle Shane though.
Gabriel vs Sacramentum was another of those no shows that can only really be handled in a beat down or a result like this. At least it was played off well with the creepy appearance of Seromine's followers. Very eerie and I expect NCM's going to be getting up close and personal with that creepiness. In all seriousness, Rick it's always a pleasure, let's bring the house down.
Whitey vs Saniti was a great contest and the interruption from Seromine's followers raises the question of just who he's looking to interfere with. At the moment they just seemed to be hanging out being ominous and creepy... hey, that's my schtick!
Another strong and enigmatic segment to the show, is this Grimm pontificating on his own irresistible power or somebody else targeting him? Either way this segment does nothing to put anyone at ease. Grimm is always there and always threatening.
Shane vs Eira was a well written match and a good contest, I'm glad that Kris got the respect of having that as we all know she's had a ton of shit to deal with recently. I'm happy to see that she'll still be carrying on with Eira and Kelli though of course I'm sad to see her leave the role of DWO. The ending did great to show the consequences of Shane's deauchbagery but we all know it won't end there.
With that rivalry and the others going on, it's hard to see how the TIIT will influence them going into Living a Legacy. But it's going to be a hell of a ride. Bring on the next show.
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Post by Kyle Shane on May 2, 2017 1:21:03 GMT -5
I feel like the show as a whole does a good job week to week of keeping storylines rolling, it's a testament to the work of Seromine that the segments with the followers never feel overexposed. And the tournament rolls on with some good showings and some fun surprises to shake up the brackets.
I had been hoping Olivia was still here because our interactions were fun. I wanted to keep the main feud between Olivia and Kyle on the backburner while Hiroshi steps up to the plate and gets his shot at the title. For the segments, it was collaborative, and I think this story is a good one that warrants an escalating tension. Neither one of us has to turn heel, but this is going to be a good one.
Congratulations to Gabriel, Hiroshi, and Whitey this week for advancing in the tournament. Good writing went into making them all look like strong contenders in the brackets. And High Tide is actually one of my favorite undercard acts.
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Post by Grimm on May 10, 2017 14:16:54 GMT -5
What happened that lead to Ace and Jerry picking on each other so much? Childhood trauma? Failed dreams?
No-shows are always a bummer, of course, but I personally enjoy Tamora’s RPs quite a bit so I expected this outcome regardless. That being said, no-shows sting a little more when it’s someone who was so active on the boards for such a brief time.
And it stinks that Kris2 seems to have had to leave PCW yet again, because she’s a darn good RP’er…but the Kyle Shane / Hiroshi Yukio segment was a good building block to what I suspect will be a solid ongoing feud.
NCM speaking in vagaries to the new president, huh? Wonder what that’s going to lead to.
I don’t remember ever seeing anything from this Sacramentum character, so I just assumed Rick, er, Gabriel was going to have his way with him. And, well, he sort of did.
You knew Saniti and Ford would be a good match, and whoever came out the winner would have to earn it.
Re: the Grimm segment – I know it didn’t really advance any storylines or build anything up, but I figured since he wasn’t booked in a match I should at least submit something for the show. And, well, that just came to me.
Congratulations to all those moving on in the tournament!
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Post by "The Asshole" Whitey Ford on May 10, 2017 17:29:47 GMT -5
I really, really liked your segment for 210.
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