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["The Asshole" Whitey Ford]

Grimm:

Holy.  Fuck.

There's just way too much to say about your roleplay.  That was just absolutely impressive, and one of the best reads I've had in a long, long time.  That was creepy as fuck and it was so intensely worded that I got sucked in.  I'm actually legit scared, just a little bit.  Well done, Nate!  I nominate that for a fucking Icey!

[Kyle Shane]

Additionally, Seromine's "92802" was a brilliantly meta piece that really surprised me.

You guys make me wanna break into your houses and smash your keyboards with a bat. T.T

[The Anarchist]

Thanks! I appreciate it

I found the second effort from Alyce Starchylde to be an improvement over the debut. Not that the initial was a bad introduction, just this one worked better for me and managed to give me some laughs. I really dug the then/now theme as well.

Sicko. I love that character. Pretty scary guy with an equally creepy ice cream truck. I almost feel I need to take a shower afterwards, because that guy has ick written all over him. Curious to see how everything works out. Like he does with Kyle Shane, Bryan really does an excellent job of constructing a story, providing plenty of detail, giving us scattered characters with their own brief personalities (enough for a connection is what I mean) and then tying everything together seamlessly. Sicko brings the fear and dread that reminds me of 1970's LA when serial killers were roaming. We all know the ice cream man and summertime. Coupled with suburbia, you got yourself an American nightmare! Excellent RP.

Grimm is Grimm. What else can one say? I've never hid the fact that I'm a huge fan of Nate's work. I'll also echo Dustin's sentiment and add that Grimm has seemed more...grim, as of late. The previous history lesson and this effort, knocked it out of the park. Always eloquent in a way that is pure poetry to read.