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Post by Nathan Saniti on Jun 20, 2017 10:48:12 GMT -5
Whilst you await results, why not earn some points and give your fellow handlers some feedback on their work? Nothing grows in stagnant waters except mosquitoes. Nobody likes those bastards.
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Post by alycestarchylde on Jun 21, 2017 12:34:26 GMT -5
Most of the work this week was simple but strong.
Whitey Ford can impress with even a short RP. Kudos. The only thing to make it better would have been more of it.
Kyle Shane...your work is always impressive. Only criticism...this story feels off somehow. Rushed, maybe? Just the energy of the piece is off. Does that make sense. Your characterization is strong as always and your dialogue is pretty spot on.
NCM. Your work is entertaining and strong.
Grimm Jesus, man, you are like the John Wick of PCW...they fucked your puppy and now you come back strong. Good work.
Overall, I liked it all this week...the four I mentioned though...well, I am glad I'm not a judge.
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Kyle Shane
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Post by Kyle Shane on Jun 22, 2017 4:16:54 GMT -5
Let's give this a whirl. For points, I guess. And just because.
Seromine. Fighting back strong with one of the most interesting pieces he's written. It was meta, almost fourth wall thinning, and yet it gave strong motivation to Seromine to get back in gear. Seeing Seromine as more human is an interesting departure. Very well done.
Alyce. You're really coming into this character now, Dean. The use of mythology is deep, and it makes me want to see it branch out into deeper waters, with other occult and mythic figures. You excel at gruff, unlikeable characters.
Grimm... bruising. Uncompromising. Implacable. Damn, I don't wanna be Whitey when you get your hands on him, after that.
NCM. Please don't do any more promos like that. It made me very sad! (Also it was amazing and your character work is goals okay fine.)
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