Kyle Shane
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Post by Kyle Shane on Jul 10, 2017 3:29:45 GMT -5
Since Saniti is being hung up by his thumbs for making us wait, let's get the ball rolling with some feedback for the show why not.
What did you like? What did you dislike?
Favorite matches, segments, roleplays of the week, etcetera.
So, personal props to the guy I assume wrote the Sicko match, you nailed his character really well and crafted a compelling bout while getting in references to his mannerisms and things from the roleplays. Masterfully done.
The best match of the show in my mind was the opening tag match. The segment with Alexa Black was interesting because I haven't read her roleplay yet, so I was very interested to see who the mysterious group were.
I missed, somehow, when Dominator debuted, his handler creating a Chronological Order tag. It makes me happy even though it's a reference I don't think but a few people here will get. But, Dominator is looking like a force to be reckoned with and shades of Braun Strowman in how the beatdown on Crazy Boy came along. That's... stay off my turf, dammit.
I was surprised to have won in the main event because Whitey and Nathan's roleplays were great reads and I felt like it took me a while writing to get down to the meat of the "why we are telling this story". But it was fun collaborating with Whitey on a backstage segment and now I wanna see Kyle and Whitey interact more.
Good show guys. Now shwarma after?
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Post by Dominator / Mortimer on Jul 10, 2017 5:23:11 GMT -5
I've also got to give kudos to the match writer of my match. I loved the little add-ons with Mortimer's "time" based quips, plus the little part at the end where Horacio calls the exact time of the match ending. That's what I envisioned for him every time he is at Dominator's side, so hats off to you, Mr or Mrs Writer-Man or Writer-Lady.
To be fair, Strowman has a heavy influence on how Dominator is portrayed. I even threw a "I'm not finished with you" line in there as I thought it would give people more of a mental image of what was happening when they are able to compare it to something they're already familiar with.
One small note... I know Horacio defaults to being spelled with a T (i.e Horatio) but I spell it with a C. Not a big deal, just thought I'd point it out.
Enough about me though...
I don't think that there was a single bad RP this week. I think that the stuff that comes out from you guys in around 2000 words or so is mindblowing! I can't pick out a particular favourite (I guess I'll go with Sicko). Segment-wise, the backstage stuff between Kyle Shane and Whitey Ford was a good read and I'll echo Kyle's feedback on the Alexa Black segment.
I'm enjoying it here. I think I'll be sticking around for a while. So long as I don't get tempted to add a second character and then run out of ideas, I should be good...
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Kyle Shane
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Post by Kyle Shane on Jul 10, 2017 5:44:23 GMT -5
I know, it's just funny, I had Strowman in mind when I made Sicko here, but I concede that he's a better fit for Kane.
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Post by Dominator / Mortimer on Jul 10, 2017 5:50:30 GMT -5
I know, it's just funny, I had Strowman in mind when I made Sicko here, but I concede that he's a better fit for Kane. What's weirder is that even though I know Sicko was originally a Sweet Tooth homage, I always kinda saw him as Grimoire Xmyles on steroids... Kinda like Batman: Arkham Asylum after Joker consumes the Titan Formula... (uh, spoilers?) |
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Post by Nathan Saniti on Jul 10, 2017 7:16:24 GMT -5
I have to give a HUGE shout-out to The Anarchist for his hard work this cycle. He wrote two of the four matches, one was last minute. So, thank you, Jase for all of your hard work! |
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Post by The Anarchist on Jul 10, 2017 8:54:38 GMT -5
You're welcome!
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Post by Rick Majors on Jul 10, 2017 9:18:14 GMT -5
I was surprised to have won in the main event because Whitey and Nathan's roleplays were great reads and I felt like it took me a while writing to get down to the meat of the "why we are telling this story". You probably had a decent partner or something...  |
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Post by Nathan Saniti on Jul 10, 2017 9:30:56 GMT -5
I was surprised to have won in the main event because Whitey and Nathan's roleplays were great reads and I felt like it took me a while writing to get down to the meat of the "why we are telling this story". You probably had a decent partner or something... If you guys really want to know there was literally 0.17 points difference between the two teams this week (averaged from all three judges). You escaped by the skin on your teeth. |
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Post by alycestarchylde on Jul 10, 2017 16:23:54 GMT -5
Yeah have to admit it was one of the best PCW shows I've read this week. Seromine and saniti wrote gold matches, My favorite was the main event, but that opening match...that is so Alyce. Loved it. Also, I would tag with Dominator every week...it was that much fun to work with him (team name, Beauty and the Beast).
Back to feedback, I loved the interplay between the announcers, really on point this week...actually made me laugh out loud and that is rare. The whole show felt like it had been written by one person so whether it was by accident or design, kudos.
Shane is always a good read and so is Ford. This will be an interesting feud.
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Post by "The Asshole" Whitey Ford on Jul 10, 2017 20:56:42 GMT -5
I'm at work currently for the next 3 hours. I'll do better feedback when I get home. But I will say that I loved how everyone looked great in the main event. I'm currently feuding with seromine, Kyle Shane, and Grimm. I'm a sucker for punishment and I need to step my game up!
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Kyle Shane
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Post by Kyle Shane on Jul 11, 2017 3:39:09 GMT -5
You probably had a decent partner or something... If you guys really want to know there was literally 0.17 points difference between the two teams this week (averaged from all three judges). You escaped by the skin on your teeth. We didnt, Mister Stick in the Mud! |
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