Post by Joka on Mar 28, 2018 3:16:33 GMT -5
I rarely do this... but chapter 2 in the lost tales of Joka is up. I don't know how many parts A Tragic and Beautiful Descent will have but it ain't anywhere near the end.
For those curious. The VR exposure therapy I keep referring to actually exists. Bravemind is a VR Exposure Therapy that the military is testing on soldiers with PTSD. It's meant to reenact the battle situation that caused the trigger for their PTSD and it's actually done like it is in my roleplay. They write down a very detailed story of the battle or situation and the team builds it in the computer. The nano technology I referenced in this newest roleplay is actually another tech that scientists are working on. Nanoscale gold wires plugged into the brain to measure and manipulate electrical signals in the brain. Pretty much, they aim to be able to make people relive memories, experience certain emotions, and manipulate dreams. Probably thought I was just pulling that shit outta my ass huh?
Anyways... feedback would be appreciated. I've already caught the spelling and grammatical mistakes. I usually keep them in for posterity though. The first roleplay was done in a script style because the dialogue was inevitably going to be heavy in that one. Had to introduce ya'll to the good Doctor. The second one was first person because ya'll needed to hear the voices in Joka's head for it to work. The next one might be third person/novel style but I'm playing around with the idea of maybe a first person telling from a different character. Probably either Monster, or the Doctor.
And thanks for reading mah shit. Moar to come fer sure.
For those curious. The VR exposure therapy I keep referring to actually exists. Bravemind is a VR Exposure Therapy that the military is testing on soldiers with PTSD. It's meant to reenact the battle situation that caused the trigger for their PTSD and it's actually done like it is in my roleplay. They write down a very detailed story of the battle or situation and the team builds it in the computer. The nano technology I referenced in this newest roleplay is actually another tech that scientists are working on. Nanoscale gold wires plugged into the brain to measure and manipulate electrical signals in the brain. Pretty much, they aim to be able to make people relive memories, experience certain emotions, and manipulate dreams. Probably thought I was just pulling that shit outta my ass huh?
Anyways... feedback would be appreciated. I've already caught the spelling and grammatical mistakes. I usually keep them in for posterity though. The first roleplay was done in a script style because the dialogue was inevitably going to be heavy in that one. Had to introduce ya'll to the good Doctor. The second one was first person because ya'll needed to hear the voices in Joka's head for it to work. The next one might be third person/novel style but I'm playing around with the idea of maybe a first person telling from a different character. Probably either Monster, or the Doctor.
And thanks for reading mah shit. Moar to come fer sure.