David Hunter
PCW Talent
If you're facing a Hunter, you should always fear the Deathshot.
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Post by David Hunter on Oct 8, 2018 13:56:55 GMT -5
First RP as David. Still trying to find the groove of things. I realize the character might be slightly different than the one you saw in the News and Rumors post, but I'm giving it a shot and seeing how it goes.
Any thoughts? Too vague? Too much? Too meh? Not enough backstory?
If you're walking into this I kinda threw a bunch of names out there but I think I hid them behind a wall enough for now.
Let me hear it.
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Post by Stormm on Oct 8, 2018 14:40:55 GMT -5
Moved to the Feedback board, since, well, it's asking for feedback!  |
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David Hunter
PCW Talent
If you're facing a Hunter, you should always fear the Deathshot.
Posts: 198
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Post by David Hunter on Oct 8, 2018 14:53:06 GMT -5
Schnikes. Sorry about that.
And thanks. Saw another feedback in the main board and got confused.
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Post by Stormm on Oct 8, 2018 15:49:25 GMT -5
Schnikes. Sorry about that. And thanks. Saw another feedback in the main board and got confused. Oh, you can bet I'll hunt that down... when I have time... unless I forget about it before then!  |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Oct 9, 2018 1:28:21 GMT -5
With some feedback.
What do you all think of my current story arc I'm writing?
Anyone a fan? Are my RPs coherent? Am I asking too many questions?
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Post by Stormm on Oct 9, 2018 9:02:56 GMT -5
Hey, are you looking for feedback? Ask for it here. Post feedback about other RPs and get the conversation rolling! I'm looking at you David Hunter & Gerard Angelo (among others who I'm sure would like some feedback as well!)  Merged both of your threads into here as well. |
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David Hunter
PCW Talent
If you're facing a Hunter, you should always fear the Deathshot.
Posts: 198
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Post by David Hunter on Oct 9, 2018 9:42:02 GMT -5
I've known Kyle's and Dominator's writing style for a while and it's nice to see that they've never lost a step despite being at this for a good while. If anything they've gained steps since coming here.
Gerard: Your RP was a nice little story that wrapped itself up while leaving things open for the future. I'm interested in where things are going.
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Oct 9, 2018 12:30:59 GMT -5
I enjoyed the different story you put out there Hunter.
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Post by Dominator / Mortimer on Oct 9, 2018 17:30:47 GMT -5
From Hunter's RP...
She touched the Dad button.
“Shouldn’t’a done that,” David says.
Is that a Team Four Star reference/quote I see? I freaking LOVE DBZ Abridged.
Good to have you here, Josh. Whether you were Hawaiian Hardhead, Nio, Nathan Miles or anyone else, I've always been a fan of your work. I see David Hunter as a more serious version of Derek Cosmos at this early stage, so I'm interested to see where it goes.
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David Hunter
PCW Talent
If you're facing a Hunter, you should always fear the Deathshot.
Posts: 198
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Post by David Hunter on Oct 9, 2018 17:35:55 GMT -5
That was indeed a TFS reference. I've been binging them a lot after 60 came out.
And I don't know who Derek Cosmos is but I'll take that as a good thing.
And thanks man.
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