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Post by Loki on Jul 14, 2020 21:24:15 GMT -5
I will be getting feedback posted over the next couple of days but I would love some feedback on my rp as well. It's the first time I've written this character in five years.
Thanks <3
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 14, 2020 22:50:35 GMT -5
I will be getting feedback posted over the next couple of days but I would love some feedback on my rp as well. It's the first time I've written this character in five years. Thanks <3 I enjoyed the read. I wasn't around during your last turn here Look forward to the possibility of more down the line |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 14, 2020 22:55:16 GMT -5
I agree with Frank, as I wasn't here for your last run, but I enjoyed it.
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Post by Grimm on Jul 15, 2020 10:51:08 GMT -5
"What Do You Remember" -- LokiThat was terrible. You should have stayed retired. Hahahahaha, just kidding. *wipes tear* I thought this was on par with your work back in the olden times (which I always liked), and I particularly liked how you didn't come in with bombastic guns a-blazin', talking about how things were going to change and you're back to reclaim your rightful place, etc., etc. Instead, not only did you bring up your past failures, you even went as far as to acknowledge how your current foes are right in regards to the derogatory comments they've made about you. You don't see that too much in an efed. This was probably one of the more realistic RPs I've read in a while, and that's a nice palate cleanser. Welcome back! While I'm here... "The Razor's Edge" -- Gerard AngeloI gotta say, the bit where Kara turns things around and talks about the reasons why Gerard should actually be flattered he's facing The Big Dog was some nice work. Much like what I enjoyed about Loki's RP, that's some realistic behind-the-scenes pro wrestling business talk right there. Kind of makes me wish I followed it enough to work stuff like that into my own RPs. Oh well. Thumbs up, Gerard. |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 15, 2020 12:35:15 GMT -5
Well thanks, Grimm, I appreciate that. Though I could never see Grimm breaking kayfabe, ever.
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Post by Grimm on Jul 15, 2020 13:05:34 GMT -5
Well thanks, Grimm, I appreciate that. Though I could never see Grimm breaking kayfabe, ever. I'd have to build to that, I reckon. |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 15, 2020 18:11:40 GMT -5
The Grimm character reminds me of the Undertaker(not just because of the supernatural elements, either) so I imagine him living the gimmick to make it work. Like I don't even imagine Grimm having a phone, I feel like he communicates via raven.
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Post by Grimm on Jul 20, 2020 6:47:03 GMT -5
"Grimm's Diner" (and "Welcome to the Next Level", while we're here) -- Rick MajorsI'm not just saying this because Grimm is 0-for-the-last-2-times-he's-faced-this-guy, but where have you been hiding this Rick Majors? Though, I guess you can't use that approach from Grimm's Diner any more. None of that stuff is true. |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 20, 2020 13:29:28 GMT -5
Breaking out Rick from NLCW, I see you.
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 20, 2020 18:04:00 GMT -5
Breaking out Rick from NLCW, I see you. heh.... I getcha there |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 20, 2020 18:41:50 GMT -5
Breaking out Rick from NLCW, I see you. heh.... I getcha there Frank remember when we tagged for a bit in NLCW and they couldn't get the tag team name right lol |
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 20, 2020 19:17:32 GMT -5
Frank remember when we tagged for a bit in NLCW and they couldn't get the tag team name right lol Kinda.....that's when I started going through my divorce from destiny |
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 20, 2020 19:23:09 GMT -5
Aw man now I feel like a dick.
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 20, 2020 21:38:12 GMT -5
Aw man now I feel like a dick. Naw...no need....that trainwreck had long been over |
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 20, 2020 21:39:04 GMT -5
Tbh...Frank's character reminds me of her
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Post by Rick Majors on Jul 20, 2020 21:39:06 GMT -5
NLCW Rick Majors was kind of a dick.
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Post by Gerard Angelo on Jul 20, 2020 22:06:14 GMT -5
being a dick on the internet is fun!
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Post by Holden Ross on Jul 20, 2020 22:54:56 GMT -5
being a dick on the internet is fun! Even more fun in real life |
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Post by Alexa Black on Jul 20, 2020 23:12:13 GMT -5
being a dick on the internet is fun! Hence why I love being Alexa so much. She’s such a MASSIVE BITCH lol 😂 |
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