IN LAIMAN'S TERMS: RP Guidelines - Kinks

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This isn't a true episode of the show for its purposes, but I tried implementing some of the suggestions from yesterday's video to give it a test run. While I did this video to help those who've been needing feedback, take it for what it's worth. It's more a trial run of the technicalities.

Edit: FYI, the movie clips were just a joke that I did for fun, since this wasn't really a true episode. They won't be part of the actual show when the storylines really take off.

[Loki]

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEARD

[hybrid]

This was sooooo full of win. Loved the comedy element you threw in there. This is something that every e-fed should have. *Very* well done.

[Mr. Showtime]

Epic win. This was very well done and had my attention the entire time. Your public speaking skills went from being a bit chopping the first time to being close to perfect. You were calm and spoke at a good pace.

This was great and everyone should watch this and use this the next time they write a RP.

[Heavy Metal]

Wow, most awesome. That was a good layout for presenting the advice, you obviously went in with a plan and weren’t all over the place. Your delivery is nicely engaging, too, I was paying attention to you the whole time. And thanks for the excellent advice while I’m at it, I think some of it is going to be very helpful to me personally.

Two things I’d offer here. It didn’t happen often, but when doing an edit I think it’s better to risk too long of a pause than to step on your own words. The second is pure nitpicky aesthetics – dark hair and a dark suit means indistinct dark shapes in the background can be a little distracting, especially when working with this video quality. The pictures were sort of sticking out of your head, and that’s seriously all I can think of right now.

Extremely cool.