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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2011 7:51:59 GMT -5
Whoring for comment love, yes... But I spent six hours creating the end segment, writing, filming, editing, and waited another hour to post. Please leave some love, this was the second straight show I wrote tonight.
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Post by Heavy Metal on Mar 2, 2011 9:18:56 GMT -5
I look forward to In Laiman’s Terms as much as I look forward to the results. Great thanks (as always) for putting in the time. Above and beyond, man.
That trailer for Living a Legacy was brilliant. You have a real knack for dramatic timing and the music choice was ideal. Damn fine stuff.
Immortal Dialog:
“Definitely the match of the night so far, seeing as how we’ve had two matches shorter than Zellmo wrestling with sanity.”
“Grimm can’t show fear! The next thing you know, Tommy Wiseau will be a good actor!”
“Since the Icey tournament has been full of upsets, I’m going to pick one here and hope my brackets aren’t any more fucked.”
“I’m not feeling that Cinderella-like, especially if she gets gang raped in Nacho’s next RP.” (I almost did a spit take on that one)
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“Never has ‘I am kind’ sounded like ‘I’m going to kill you’.” (That reminds me, I backed it up three times. Did you really call Tom a twat waffle?)
The RP readings are a great addition, please keep it up. *smacks own head* Duh, of course it was the Hurricane, I should have been able to call that one.
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 10:09:44 GMT -5
That was quality. Using the 'prayer' I wrote was hilarious, lol. You do these really, really well and as Heavy Metal said, I look forward to these almost as much as I look forward to results. Love the references, impersonations, and other random things. So well done.
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Post by A Ghost in the Wind on Mar 2, 2011 10:16:30 GMT -5
Your clips were edited in very well. I think this edition, you did it better than any previous edition. I do wish more people would have submitted their 'top rps' of the week, but it is what it is. Is it just me, or was this one of the shorter editions? Maybe it just seemed shorter, because I was more entertained? I don't know. All in all, good job again. And I too look forward to your videos (as well as looking forward to 2Guys' audio column and Ace's written one).
**Side-note: I hope these special attractions don't become more popular than the results.**
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Post by Loki on Mar 2, 2011 10:38:13 GMT -5
Dude...what was with all the Tom hate in that one  |
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 10:40:58 GMT -5
**Side-note: I hope these special attractions don't become more popular than the results.** Keep in mind that this pretty much is the results, lol. I don't think it could ever overtake the results. It's like saying a recap of a movie is better than the movie itself... and in this case, that movie is Inception. |
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Post by Ace Anderson on Mar 2, 2011 10:58:38 GMT -5
This was great, Al. As has been said, your edits were spot on. I liked all the clips that you used, and they were all very appropriate to your script. Good job recapping the show in your own unique and humorous way. You introduced the PPV with some predictions that can get behind someone or light a fire under them, not to mention a cool trailer, and the RP readings are a great idea. I'm flattered to have appeared  Everyone, let's give a great show for Living a Legacy so Al can do another great In Laiman's Terms! The only criticism that isn't even a criticism is that you've done well at keeping the length consistent, and I'm hoping you can do the same in the future. I think 12-14 minutes is a great length of time for this show. |
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Post by Heavy Metal on Mar 2, 2011 11:09:15 GMT -5
**Side-note: I hope these special attractions don't become more popular than the results.** I don't think you have to worry about that, man. Nope. |
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Post by Andy D on Mar 2, 2011 15:12:15 GMT -5
haha, brilliant show man - dont think i stopped laughing for about 5 minutes during that... awesome. The trailer at the end was fantastic, i didnt think i could get more hyped for the PPV, you've proved me wrong
The only thing i have a problem with (and its a personal thing, not anything you did wrong) is that i thought Park's Prayer should have been done in a more southern evangelical reverands voice... but yeah, personal gripe, nothing more
Please, keep up the good works... and if you think 6 hours is long, my audio stuff takes longer than that... and that runs in at about the same running time
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2011 15:53:39 GMT -5
**Side-note: I hope these special attractions don't become more popular than the results.** Keep in mind that this pretty much is the results, lol. I don't think it could ever overtake the results. It's like saying a recap of a movie is better than the movie itself... and in this case, that movie is Inception. You do not insult movies I love on my own thread, Park! |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2011 16:01:11 GMT -5
I look forward to In Laiman’s Terms as much as I look forward to the results. Great thanks (as always) for putting in the time. Above and beyond, man. That trailer for Living a Legacy was brilliant. You have a real knack for dramatic timing and the music choice was ideal. Damn fine stuff. Immortal Dialog: “Definitely the match of the night so far, seeing as how we’ve had two matches shorter than Zellmo wrestling with sanity.” “Grimm can’t show fear! The next thing you know, Tommy Wiseau will be a good actor!” “Since the Icey tournament has been full of upsets, I’m going to pick one here and hope my brackets aren’t any more fucked.” “I’m not feeling that Cinderella-like, especially if she gets gang raped in Nacho’s next RP.” (I almost did a spit take on that one) And... “Never has ‘I am kind’ sounded like ‘I’m going to kill you’.” (That reminds me, I backed it up three times. Did you really call Tom a twat waffle?) The RP readings are a great addition, please keep it up. *smacks own head* Duh, of course it was the Hurricane, I should have been able to call that one. Believe it or not, I try to write lines that you'll pick for immortal dialogue. I got at least one. And yes, I did call Tom a twatwaffle. That was quality. Using the 'prayer' I wrote was hilarious, lol. You do these really, really well and as Heavy Metal said, I look forward to these almost as much as I look forward to results. Love the references, impersonations, and other random things. So well done. I did tell you I was going to steal it. Just everyone keep in mind... The results make the show, the show doesn't make results. Your clips were edited in very well. I think this edition, you did it better than any previous edition. I do wish more people would have submitted their 'top rps' of the week, but it is what it is. Is it just me, or was this one of the shorter editions? Maybe it just seemed shorter, because I was more entertained? I don't know. All in all, good job again. And I too look forward to your videos (as well as looking forward to 2Guys' audio column and Ace's written one). **Side-note: I hope these special attractions don't become more popular than the results.** I do hope it was because you were more entertained. I think it's because I'm getting more practice at this. It was a little bit shorter because of the trailer, so I had to get within that time limit. Special attractions do not become more popular than the main show, and if they do, I won't be doing these because I wouldn't disrespect PCW that way. Dude...what was with all the Tom hate in that one Oh please, like we don't bust on each other all the time. This was great, Al. As has been said, your edits were spot on. I liked all the clips that you used, and they were all very appropriate to your script. Good job recapping the show in your own unique and humorous way. You introduced the PPV with some predictions that can get behind someone or light a fire under them, not to mention a cool trailer, and the RP readings are a great idea. I'm flattered to have appeared Everyone, let's give a great show for Living a Legacy so Al can do another great In Laiman's Terms! The only criticism that isn't even a criticism is that you've done well at keeping the length consistent, and I'm hoping you can do the same in the future. I think 12-14 minutes is a great length of time for this show. Of course you appeared, you're in one of the three biggest hyped showdowns. Well do keep in mind not only have I tried to keep the time consistent for style reasons, but because YouTube has a fifteen minute limit. Thanks a lot, Ace! haha, brilliant show man - dont think i stopped laughing for about 5 minutes during that... awesome. The trailer at the end was fantastic, i didnt think i could get more hyped for the PPV, you've proved me wrong The only thing i have a problem with (and its a personal thing, not anything you did wrong) is that i thought Park's Prayer should have been done in a more southern evangelical reverands voice... but yeah, personal gripe, nothing more Please, keep up the good works... and if you think 6 hours is long, my audio stuff takes longer than that... and that runs in at about the same running time I wish I'd thought of the Evangelical voice. I guess I went too Catholic Priest. How on Earth does that take longer? |
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Post by Andy D on Mar 2, 2011 16:07:01 GMT -5
no idea, but i take 2 evenings making the damn thing... i was asleep when the results went up and you had yours up by my lunch break... your definatly faster...
Aslo, i dont think park was insulting inception - i thought he said that a recap of inception cant be called better than the movie itself... therefore this, as a recap of trauma, cant be called better than the show itself
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 16:08:27 GMT -5
no idea, but i take 2 evenings making the damn thing... i was asleep when the results went up and you had yours up by my lunch break... your definatly faster... Aslo, i dont think park was insulting inception - i thought he said that a recap of inception cant be called better than the movie itself... therefore this, as a recap of trauma, cant be called better than the show itself Indeed. I loved Inception. You're exactly right. Sorry for the mix-up. |
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 16:09:30 GMT -5
On a side note, I own Inception on Blu-ray. It's the only movie I've purchased in two years.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2011 16:46:22 GMT -5
Oh, I get it now! I misunderstood what you meant. It's like saying the results themselves are the movie Inception, not that the recap was better than the movie. My fault, Mike.
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Post by Loki on Mar 2, 2011 17:02:07 GMT -5
Christopher Nolan stole the idea for Inception from a Donald Duck comic.
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 17:02:41 GMT -5
Oh, I get it now! I misunderstood what you meant. It's like saying the results themselves are the movie Inception, not that the recap was better than the movie. My fault, Mike. No worries, man. It's all good. I'd take offense if I thought someone insulted Inception too. Haha. |
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Post by hybrid on Mar 2, 2011 17:03:17 GMT -5
Christopher Nolan stole the idea for Inception from a Donald Duck comic. Now where have I heard the name Loki before? Sounds a little bit like Low Ki... |
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Post by Sadistic on Mar 3, 2011 0:44:12 GMT -5
LoKi is a mischievous god.
I hate Inception!
Provocative.
Oh, and another great show, Al. I really don't have anything more to add that hasn't already been covered by the boys. Although I agree with 2Guys that a southern voice would have been snazzy.
And the more Tom clips, the merrier!
Goodnight, all!
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