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Post by Nathan Saniti on Dec 3, 2014 10:15:46 GMT -5
I finally landed my first (albeit still unpaid) fiction writing gig! If you get a chance, check out The Chronicles of Dan Fierce! www.kcpride.com/for-whom-the-wedding-bell-tolls-author-the-chronicles-of-dan-fierce/Try not pay attention to the spacing or the minor errors. If I get my own login, I'll correct those. They're driving my GrammarOCD off the charts. Any feedback would be appreciated. Keep in mind too that this is a gay-based site.
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Post by Sadistic on Dec 3, 2014 19:47:32 GMT -5
That was a really good story, Dan. And just when it started to get interesting...cliffhanger! Is it wrong that I wanted to punch Clara in her invisible lips? Although different than your usual writing, there was still enough word creativity in there that made it recognizably you. Especially the "Next!" portion of the story. This did an awesome job of drawing emotion from me once they reached the clerk. I was angry reading that. You have a great knack for storytelling. Keep up the good work and congratulations.
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Post by Nathan Saniti on Dec 4, 2014 6:07:02 GMT -5
Thank you very much Josh. That really means a lot to me. :-)
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